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小渔村36期初级词班A组第十一讲作业贴 |
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问好学友;小词格律正确,脉络清晰,点赞!对仗句还望斟酌!个见,海涵!
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问好学友;小词格律正确,脉络清晰,点赞!对仗不工,有些词还望斟酌!l加油!个见!
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问好学友;小词格律正确,点赞!整首词太直白,寒衾缠身复到东,这句话不通,为写作业而凑句,个见!
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