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小渔村楹联十二期初级班第七讲寻芳组作业贴 |
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析联准确 ,对句不错!
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对句、析联都挺棒!没找出毛病,赞!
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问好雨菡同学,析联都很好!
对句1,前四不太好,孤行与客路有点重复
对句2前四后三关联的不好
对句3,挺好!
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