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小渔村词研七(琴组)第20讲作业帖 |
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问好诗友,用词准确,写的不错
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问好组座。拜读大作,词格无误,词风婉约,情景交融,感情真挚,结句有余味,赞!
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问好组长,格律用韵正确,脉络清晰布局合理,整体不错言辞流畅,,学习点赞!
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格律无误。文辞隽秀,对仗工整。吹毛求疵结句有提升空间,赏学!
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